Hi my name is Manawa and yesterday I found a portal in my desk i know that you think i am crazy but i'm not there on no bullies coming Im jumping in now wow wow wow
were in the heavens look there is a lake look
There is wolf's tigers birds koi fish bears chester girat on no they're coming towards me what I see some one other there aaaaaaaaaaaaaa I went up into a tree who re you I'm the queen of the heavens I have a king but we what a child i will be your child thanks i like every animal here could I live here please yes you can but you need to learn there ways okay good you have learn the ways of these animal but now you need to led them done now feed them done
hi this is my free write itis a portal in my desk have a we look
Hey it's Miro G
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a great story and is creative. Maybe you should have added in more punctuation and when you pasted the story in go control+shift+v instead of control+v so the writing doesn't go off the page.
Thanks!
no wores
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